i'd like to preface this by saying there's nothing I appreciate more than a concise, numbered list (dare I say I appreciate a good framework? see, I'm learning). this is only made better when built upon with additional imagery and anecdotes, which is what makes this week a particular favorite
in regards to the references made to your past/current drafts - man-eating plants? A young cannibal couple? don't think I'll move past this so easily, where do I sign for an ARC
the only con to this week's writing - and it pains me to say this - Jane & John Doe get their favorite comfort food at their local /Denny's/? once they clean out the new ride, i hope they leave this town and Denny's behind (and any murder charges!)
1. Those cannibals are sentenced to a dusty corner to think about their poor plot planning, but the man-eating plants will surely see some sun! I'll keep you posted about beta-reading and ARCs (still ~6 months out)
2. Could you really expect anything better from Jane & John? Of all the inspirational places to hide a body, they chose a port-a-potty...
3. Given audience demand, I might have to share more numbered lists :)
i'd like to preface this by saying there's nothing I appreciate more than a concise, numbered list (dare I say I appreciate a good framework? see, I'm learning). this is only made better when built upon with additional imagery and anecdotes, which is what makes this week a particular favorite
in regards to the references made to your past/current drafts - man-eating plants? A young cannibal couple? don't think I'll move past this so easily, where do I sign for an ARC
the only con to this week's writing - and it pains me to say this - Jane & John Doe get their favorite comfort food at their local /Denny's/? once they clean out the new ride, i hope they leave this town and Denny's behind (and any murder charges!)
looking forward to #5!
Lists are most cerainly timeless frameworks:
1. Those cannibals are sentenced to a dusty corner to think about their poor plot planning, but the man-eating plants will surely see some sun! I'll keep you posted about beta-reading and ARCs (still ~6 months out)
2. Could you really expect anything better from Jane & John? Of all the inspirational places to hide a body, they chose a port-a-potty...
3. Given audience demand, I might have to share more numbered lists :)